Monday, August 8, 2016

Special Feature: "black sun" by the Editor


black sun through ice gnomes
monochromatic rainbows
undead penguins rise
            -- Steven Wittenberg Gordon



Poet's Notes:  After I composed this little 5-7-5er, I had a little trouble wrapping my head around it.  I recommend doing what I did--read and re-read.  You will discover the many layers of this truly disturbing horrorku.

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