Tuesday, June 9, 2015

Poem of the Day: "Dreamcatcher" by John C. Mannone

Songs of Eretz Poetry Review is pleased to present "Dreamcatcher" by John C. Mannone.  Mr. Mannone has work appearing in: The Southern Poetry Anthology (Volume VII, NC), Still: The JourmalPine Mountain Sand & GravelNegative CapabilitySplit Rock ReviewAgaveTupelo PressRaven ChroniclesPoetica MagazineSynaesthesia3Elements ReviewThe Baltimore ReviewRose Red ReviewPirene’s FountainTipton Poetry JournalPrairie Wolf Press ReviewThe PedestalMotif v2 & v3 anthologies, and others. His collection, Flux Lines, was a semi-finalist for the 2014 Mary Ballard Poetry Chapbook Prize. He’s the poetry editor for Silver Blade and Abyss & Apex, and an adjunct professor of chemistry and physics in east Tennessee. His work has been nominated three times for the Pushcart. Visit The Art of Poetryhttp://jcmannone.wordpress.com.

Dreamcatcher
John C. Mannone

            asabikeshiinh, Ojibwe word for spider

Like the shape of circle across the sky that the sun
and moon travel, its hoop is fashioned from willow
filled with webbing, the nettle fibers stranding rim.

Before the sun rises to burn nightmares in the dawn,
an asibikaashi, a spider woman, weaves a magical
web to sift the restless thoughts while we all dream.

Will she weave one for nations since the world is asleep
to crimes against humanity? I weep. Can we not be as
little children who are only frightened by the sandman,

the unknown darkness, or monsters lurking under the bed

of their imagination? Is this not a better fear to conquer
than the grown-up fears of humankind, which are real
monsters that eat our freedom, but sadly are dismissed?

And need the Asibikaashi to slip the soft, calm thoughts
through the hole in the center of the web, to glide down
the hawk feathers, that wisdom dwelling in the quiet night.

I need good dreams to intoxicate my heart with images
of you and magic of the moon glistening on the silvery web
moving ever so gently in the window, in the gentle breeze.

Poet’s Notes:  When I wrote this poem for Tupelo Press, I had been thinking about Sacred Flute, my collection of poetry infused with Indian culture, legend and history. I had just read the poem, “Securing the Line,” by Kimberly L. Becker http://www.amazon.com/The-Dividings-Kimberly-L-Becker/dp/162549064X, a Cherokee poet (The Dividings, WordTech Communications, January 2014), who uses an interesting metaphor: the poet snares words, as a spider captures prey. Though not directly, this led me to the legend of the dreamcatcher (and of the “spider woman”) http://www.firstpeople.us/FP-Html-Legends/TheLegendOfTheDreamcatcher-Chippewa.html.

In my poem, I start with a dreamcatcher, but soon transcend beyond description and beyond legend. Two extensions develop with a dreamlike, even nightmarish mood. One is external and macroscopic, hinting at the socio-economic political turmoil in the world, while the other suggests an internal and the personal darkness of the narrator. The structure of the poem—a series of tercets surrounding a single line—not only goes to the symmetry of a dreamcatcher, but also provides a pivot that bridges both worlds.

Editor’s Note:  Mr. Mannone’s verses create a dream-like mood that compliment the poetic conceit perfectly.  The single-line stanza in the center of the poem that recalls the symmetry of the dream catcher webbing is a nice touch.  The turn is smoothly executed, and I love the message about the metaphoric nightmares that now threaten all of humankind.  “Dreamcatcher” was first published in Tupelo Press in March 2014 and was reprinted in the February 2015 issue of Songs of Eretz Poetry E-zine.

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