Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Review of "Revision in My Wife's Powder Room" by Lauren Berry

Revision in My Wife's Powder Room by Lauren Berry was offered by Poets.org's Poem-A-Day on June 18, 2013.  The poet reveals in her notes that her poem was inspired by the flamingo, a "mistake of God" due to the fact that its knees bend backwards as it moves forwards.  There is some mention of that in the poem, but I find the majority of it to be a muddle.

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