Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Review of "The Left Side of Your Lover's Broken Face" by Brynn MacNab

"The Left Side of Your Lover's Broken Face" by Brynn MacNab appeared in Daily Science Fiction on May 21, 2013.  "As your friend plays ping-pong with your lover, the left side of his face falls off."  This nearly incomprehensible story is made worse by abundant second person POV.  1 out of 7 rocket-dragons.

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